Blog Adress:
www.jaerysblog.blogspot.com
Date: 2013 / 8 / 5
Dear parents,
I am writing this letter because I believe I should be allowed to get my own computer. Many experts like Steve jobs, for example agree with me. I will explain reasons for this and give facts to support my opinion.
There are statistics to show this is true. With my opinion, it is easier to research, so it will have good effect on my studies. Also if you allow me to have a computer I will be glad, get happy, and get confidence, too.
The second reason is because of fast and comfortable research.
There are facts to show this is true. It has been discovered that private computer are easy to move, and they are small, so doesn't need big place.
The final reason is because many people recommend it.
There is data to show this is true. It is now known that 'Cisco(Network Expert Company)' predicts 3.8 billion people will use the Internet. Many people use computer more than Internet.
URL: Cisco's research
As you can see, I should be allowed to get my computer.
Based on my arguments, I hope you will consider my point of view and change your decision. I hope you decide "Um... I think I have to allow to get Jaery, her own computer."
Sincerely,
Jaery
I still don't think quoting Steve Jobs is a good idea, and your final argument says very little about why YOU need a computer.
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